Here's my feedback.
Get rid of the range pricing... too many agents don't know what it is and don't want to have to deal with it.
461 DOM is a long time. Take out the desk out of the master, it already is a small room, it shows very narrow and too crowded.
You may want to retake the picture of the pool.. it shows all pool and no yard although you have a separate pic of yard.
what is the room that is 15 x 5 ??? odd shape?
Lastly, I think you are still priced way above for the updating needed to be done. Countertops and cabinets are original, paneling, etc... offer closing costs to buyers...
Take it off the market and relist it with a new price. Get rid of the private remarks about the pricing.